He Looks Like My Grandpa
Duncan at an event. Phew. I've been able to write again, mornings have been freed. I'm currently reading:
Jorge Guillen
Daniel Brenner
Edmond Jabes
Holderlin (love me as i believe)
Pound ("messed up the music / to speak clearly")
Bay Poetics
Looking at:
Carl Andre
Michael Heizer
Jessica Stockholder (who has a piece called "on spending the money tenderly" - she really actually is a poet).
Hamish Fulton
And armed with all these, adjacent to the typewriter, continue apace with the mss. It's taken me months of not writing to figure out that what I thought of as a "new" manuscript (after a long talk with catherine about what i thought of as the "old" manuscript) has been latent in the old shit all along. So, I realize that everything that I've been working on is a continuum. I'm being a good pre-socratic in this sense. So, the old mss (which hit revision #20 last week) is still being (what michael heizer would call) in-filled with new poems. More and more, the basic thing seems to be, as I've mentioned ad nauseum, the path. the fall. the thing. the pathetic fallacy thing balanced by the heraclitan in-your-face variety of inquiry (that which can be beheld by the senses, that i consider best) with the kind of typological, dante-by-way-of-duncan interpenetrated understanding of the perceiving of the inhuman thing happening and the perception effects (cf Duncan's incredible "Apprehensions" in Roots & Branches).
So, the manuscript demands some kind of concentric organization, full of cognizant violations of the circle. I'm in the middle of a poem whose form is based on Jabes' "Soleilland," in which an increting (a process of internal secretion) refrain (My Love a country...My love a country a town....My love a country a town a room) reproduces in the linear motion of the poem thru time, line, and page, a process by which the poem turns along axes which themselves move (I'm thinking of the lunar cycle, kinda).
But will the mss get that form? I think, maybe. It seems to have taken years to find its place, its way of acting among its moving parts. I can see now that the importance of the "object among objects" idea of Oppen's has important repercussions fo the shape of poems in manuscripts. If they are to be set next to one another, which arguably, can resonate with little care put into it (bricolage-ism-ness) can make its oscillating proximities ring with the kinds of chance that scare paranoid astronomers (we can see from the movements, that an asteroid will hit the planet...or come close). So, you see, proximity is still a matter of finding typology in the shapes of plants, in the findings of the viewer, in the heraclitan immediacies of seeing and then calling out some succession of words and repeating. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Or, as Kim Levin said of Jessica Stockholder, an mss can "orchestrate a tender collision."
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